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Автор:  Oriole [ 08 фев 2019, 00:50 ]
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And again
It's creeping into my head
Slowly but it is
It's in my head and I can`t get it out
Going in circles
First every evening before I fall asleep
Lazily
Bringing me joy
Then every morning after I wake up
A nice way to start the day
Then every time I see something that reminds me of
That only makes sense
Then every free minute I have
What are the free minutes for
Then when the time is not right
Wait
Then every time I breath
In
And out
My chest rises
Like a hand would rise.
I want it so much
And
Again
I don't have anyone to do it with
Someone who would want it as much as I do
Because you know what
You were right when you said
That it`s much more important for me than it is for others.
More
Important
Than for you.
And at this point
I shouldn't be surprised
But I am.
And so
Scared.

Автор:  Arthur [ 08 фев 2019, 01:47 ]
Заголовок сообщения:  Re: And again

Well, isn’t that lovely :) You rock! :D

Автор:  timmie [ 08 фев 2019, 23:15 ]
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Автор:  Format C [ 17 янв 2020, 00:31 ]
Заголовок сообщения:  Re: And again

Looks like a free vers with a good rhythm, I have enjoyed reading this text.
The musical poetry without strong content is also very welcome.

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